How will we advertise Acne Away?

Our ad starts of with a girl in a Bathroom she is feeling really down because shes got lots of acne. The next scene is of her walking down the corridor and people are laughing and pointing at her. Someone trips her up, she falls over and starts crying. Then she runs into the bathroom where there is another girl who is using acne away on her face. the girl is realy friendly and asks if she would try it explaining about the product.